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My perfect moment
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Bueno amigos del foro, aqui posteo la traduccion a ingles de mi primer redaccion, que , para ser franco, no me quedo nada mal. Visiten el tema "Mi momento perfecto" para ver el texto original. Sin mas preambulos les presento mi redaccion:

My perfect moment

It was time, everything was ready, the house was empty and I had prepared the room, on this occasion so special was off every light in the house, not even the clock on the VCR was on. The room had been well lit by the warm, soft tone of scented candles lit, in addition, the room was well furnished with rose petals.
My baby, that girl with green eyes and perfect body, was ready, and I get to bed.
She began with that sweet and tender waltz, I, in a panic attack, I knew not continue and I remain frozen for that very strange and alien experience, but what was left me frozen at the same time overwhelmed me a strange sense of familiarity .
Her with its warm hands, urged me to continue, and I, stuck in my confusion, I realized that to continue and I followed like obedient child.
By continuing, all panic, all feeling that overwhelmed me was gone.
It was time, time which had heard so much, that moment than I expected, yet did not know I expected.
For a short time that it was, I felt that she and I sink into an eternal instant and constant.
Being two of us in that perfect and peaceful merger felt like such a perfect moment came to an end.
Shout with all my strength
- Because this moment so beautiful has to stop?

Just finish my cry, our perfect fusion time was interrupted by the desperate cry of the father of my baby.
That cry so full of sorrow was ended with the fulfillment of my desire.
So perfect that moment was sealed by the flowering of crimson roses in the center of our lives.
That moment was sealed in an eternal instant and constant.
That moment so perfect, so peaceful, so full of peace, never finished.
My wish is fulfilled

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